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From: Eli
Date: 15 Oct 2004
Time: 10:37:42 -0500
Remote Name: 65.73.101.79
I like how you put the story in there. It made it more interesting. I just love stories. I love the way how you don't know what's coming ahead. And I think that's great! I got some laughs, and I liked the way at the end you said "be yourself." I think that is true! Speak and don't ignore it. Kind of treat it like it's your friend, not as your foe. Thank you for writing the story. Eli, age 8